There is always a flaw to everybody. Me personaly have a lot of weaknesses.

My biggest weakness is spelling. I couldn't spell "happy" if my life depended on it. Most of my spelling erors are when I just go off on a toppic that I'm really into. Most of the time I write words that I use in speach but almost never put in letters. I need to look over the spellings of some of the words that I use so as to prevent me from misspelling them. As you saw in my essay, The microsoft word processor doesn't catch all of my mistakes.

My second worst weakness is punctuation and runons. I probly had about five runons in my Essay. If you though runons was bad wait till you see how I use commas. The thing about commas is that I don't use them. I've been doing better on putting commas in though.

I've learned from my past essays that I need to get other people to proofread my paper. If I do that I probably won't mess as much stuff up. I'll work a lot harder on it to. If I make the same grade as the other one, I might as well kiss honors English goodbuy.